who am i?
http://one.revver.com/watch/302807/flv
and
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCB8PCxf7Xk
impulse - "londonfiles_003" [06/15/07]
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I just saw it, impulse...you HAD to know I'd give you feedback the second I did! <nodding happily>
Okay, the brickwall guy...wherever did you get that...that was too cool!! And the fadeout image that looked like that...very neat! I loved that. The only thing I didn't understand (besides the who am I? as a whole - because I'm absolutely no good at that kind of thing <snicker> was the lady...she didn't make sense to me? But the images...VERY striking!! Another hit by me!
Okay, the brickwall guy...wherever did you get that...that was too cool!! And the fadeout image that looked like that...very neat! I loved that. The only thing I didn't understand (besides the who am I? as a whole - because I'm absolutely no good at that kind of thing <snicker> was the lady...she didn't make sense to me? But the images...VERY striking!! Another hit by me!
Diane, or cher, or even chershaytoute, but "Hey, you!" works, too...
WWggD - let's make the Breeniverse a better place to live...
Thanks to giddeanx for the coolest personal glue stick ever!
WWggD - let's make the Breeniverse a better place to live...
Thanks to giddeanx for the coolest personal glue stick ever!
I'm still loving this. I love the images you put into this.
So your character is tracking down Kate?
Umm.. Just a suggestion. I think that with the typed words, it might work better if you reduce the font size, bold it, and place the words at the top or bottom, instead of smack dab in the middle of the image. I know its a bit too late for that now, but maybe if you plan future works you could try that out. I think visually it would be more appealing, and the viewer can read what you are saying and see what's going on in the video at the same time.
So your character is tracking down Kate?
Umm.. Just a suggestion. I think that with the typed words, it might work better if you reduce the font size, bold it, and place the words at the top or bottom, instead of smack dab in the middle of the image. I know its a bit too late for that now, but maybe if you plan future works you could try that out. I think visually it would be more appealing, and the viewer can read what you are saying and see what's going on in the video at the same time.
