March Video Commentary Archive

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:01 pm

Guess I am not so good at writing non-stereotypical women...that's a problem...I should work on that.

Ziola · Post by **Ziola** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:02 pm

lonelyelendi wrote:Yea, that is what I was thinking. I seem to be stuck in this whole satire thing...the reason I made it so stereotypical was to make it into a commentary on the way sex (and sexuality) is used less as a means of expressing love and more as a tool.

Why am I on this damned soapbox? Could someone help me down?

I understand what you are trying to accomplish. It just seems so...I don't know...done before? I don't think that is the word I want, I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.

jc_gypsy7 · Post by **jc_gypsy7** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:03 pm

hehe.. Kenny... 9 out of 10 females of my acquaintance.. (and yours, take a look around the women in this chatroom, you have a good mixture!).. do not use guys. Yes, we laugh at you all.. cause you ARE funny! But our hearts are kind.. not mean. that's the difference between us and the woman in your monologue.

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:04 pm

Yeah, I know what you mean. Like I am the first one ever to point out this flaw in our world...I seem to be stuck on it though...not sure why.

But like I said, I really need to learn to write realistic women...

jc_gypsy7 · Post by **jc_gypsy7** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:06 pm

(Add to this that Ed states that, unequivocally, there are women like you are portraying.. but unless you're rich.. they wouldn't waste their time. A guys point of view, lol!)

Cloud_ax · Post by **Cloud_ax** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:06 pm

Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.

now you know how i feel all the time. lol.

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:07 pm

jc_gypsy7 wrote:(Add to this that Ed states that, unequivocally, there are women like you are portraying.. but unless you're rich.. they wouldn't waste their time. A guys point of view, lol!)

LOL! True...btw who is ed?

Cloud_ax · Post by **Cloud_ax** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:11 pm

Ed is Gypsy's signicicant other.

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:11 pm

AH! I thought so but I wasn't sure!

Cloud_ax · Post by **Cloud_ax** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:12 pm

glad i could clear it up for you?

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:13 pm

Speaking of gypsy...where did she run off to?

Ziola · Post by **Ziola** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:14 pm

Cloud_ax wrote:
Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
now you know how i feel all the time. lol.

Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.

Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...

jc_gypsy7 · Post by **jc_gypsy7** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:15 pm

hehe, thanks cloud!

jc_gypsy7 · Post by **jc_gypsy7** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:17 pm

Ziola wrote:Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.

Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...

omg Ziola.. ok, tell me the truth. Are you drinking.. taking drugs??? A MAN do HOUSEWORK??!!...

*collapsed in laughter at the thought... *

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:18 pm

Ziola wrote:
Cloud_ax wrote:
Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
now you know how i feel all the time. lol.
Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.

Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...

Ah-HA! And therein lies the beauty of being a member of a forum populated by so many intelligent yet stunningly-beautiful women!

You are a genius Ziola!