4 word poem another version of 4 word story

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:04 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:You say I've got the touch of an angel
and when you glance from an angle
you can see my eyes sparkle
and the love we have seems so remarkable

magical, fantasmical, words cannot explain it,
pictures can do it no justice,
only in the moment that it's happening
can it be truely felt

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:07 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:across the blue skies and pearly white clouds,
let it be known

(not all poems have to rhyme sweetie )
{aww...sweetie...}

the passion that rises within these souls
don't know any time
and withstand any present

oh the fire burns and burns not us
but the world of disbelief
for a bond that cannot be broken
can suffer no consequences

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:09 pm

LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:You say I've got the touch of an angel
and when you glance from an angle
you can see my eyes sparkle
and the love we have seems so remarkable
magical, fantasmical, words cannot explain it,
pictures can do it no justice,
only in the moment that it's happening
can it be truely felt

Love breathes from our lips
and escapes from our hearts
Blissful, unescapeable, untouchable,
but completely noticeable.

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:11 pm

LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:across the blue skies and pearly white clouds,
let it be known

(not all poems have to rhyme sweetie )
{aww...sweetie...}

the passion that rises within these souls
don't know any time
and withstand any present
oh the fire burns and burns not us
but the world of disbelief
for a bond that cannot be broken
can suffer no consequences

the smoke clouds only eyes
feelings left untouched and unwavering
isolated in the world love created just for them

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:28 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:You say I've got the touch of an angel
and when you glance from an angle
you can see my eyes sparkle
and the love we have seems so remarkable
magical, fantasmical, words cannot explain it,
pictures can do it no justice,
only in the moment that it's happening
can it be truely felt
Love breathes from our lips
and escapes from our hearts
Blissful, unescapeable, untouchable,
but completely noticeable.

Love gives and love takes,
but for us there is no mistake.
The world stands still for just this moment,
Flowers wither, stars rise and fall,
And yet entranced I stay mesmerized by the glimmer in your eyes.

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:35 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote: {aww...sweetie...}

the passion that rises within these souls
don't know any time
and withstand any present
oh the fire burns and burns not us
but the world of disbelief
for a bond that cannot be broken
can suffer no consequences
the smoke clouds only eyes
feelings left untouched and unwavering
isolated in the world love created just for them

Clouds that float inside your eyes,
same clouds that cover the rainy skies,
drops that pour as I squeeze you tight,
I'll hold you tight as long as you don't let go

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:45 pm

forgive my sudden absence

I hope when you come back we can take it to emails?

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:46 pm

LesterG wrote:forgive my sudden absence I hope when you come back we can take it to emails?

sure =P its okay, i've been busy too. Work! sheesh =P

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:48 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:forgive my sudden absence I hope when you come back we can take it to emails?
sure =P its okay, i've been busy too. Work! sheesh =P

yea and the bosses are lurking around I don't think he likes it when he catches me with this window up lol

can I email your hotmail addy?

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:50 pm

LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:forgive my sudden absence I hope when you come back we can take it to emails?
sure =P its okay, i've been busy too. Work! sheesh =P
yea and the bosses are lurking around I don't think he likes it when he catches me with this window up lol

can I email your hotmail addy?

of course =P either that or myspace or here...whichever. I check them all..

I'd almost say I check this website more than my email lol

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:52 pm

nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote: sure =P its okay, i've been busy too. Work! sheesh =P
yea and the bosses are lurking around I don't think he likes it when he catches me with this window up lol

can I email your hotmail addy?

of course =P either that or myspace or here...whichever. I check them all..

I'd almost say I check this website more than my email lol

lol same, okies you'll be getting the my half in your mailbox, when you finish yours on here =P I'm switching screens constantly to dodge the lurking 5 bosses

...but I want to continue...

maybe I"ll email you over the vacation when I can too

*hugs*

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:58 pm

LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote: oh the fire burns and burns not us
but the world of disbelief
for a bond that cannot be broken
can suffer no consequences
the smoke clouds only eyes
feelings left untouched and unwavering
isolated in the world love created just for them
Clouds that float inside your eyes,
same clouds that cover the rainy skies,
drops that pour as I squeeze you tight,
I'll hold you tight as long as you don't let go

bright flashes of lightning are so brief
but their electrical charge is still so weak
when compared to the fire that burns inside
breathtaking moments that we struggle to hide

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:01 pm

LesterG wrote:
nobackspacebutton wrote:
LesterG wrote: magical, fantasmical, words cannot explain it,
pictures can do it no justice,
only in the moment that it's happening
can it be truely felt
Love breathes from our lips
and escapes from our hearts
Blissful, unescapeable, untouchable,
but completely noticeable.
Love gives and love takes,
but for us there is no mistake.
The world stands still for just this moment,
Flowers wither, stars rise and fall,
And yet entranced I stay mesmerized by the glimmer in your eyes.

sparkling eyes cannot speak,
what this heart feels,
or why it beats,
but captured deep inside this soul,
lies the truths that both our minds will know.

LesterG · Post by **LesterG** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:03 pm

*swoooooooooooooooon*

just adding that k, I'll PM you my half in a bit

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:07 pm

LesterG wrote:*swoooooooooooooooon* just adding that k, I'll PM you my half in a bit

^_^ I love poetry...