Lonelygirl15

Posted: **Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:56 pm**

When he died, the community was up in arms. No one knew what to do. The divisions between our family were clearly marked. The Elders never saw this coming. When they met, they didn't think the division had reached them. Obviosuly they were wrong.
But little did they know, a rebelion was already beginning.

http://one.revver.com/watch/191882/flv/affiliate/42362

( it is also on my youtube if you wish to leave a comment there!)

Posted: **Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:21 pm**

Kelly, I really am impressed. This story reminds me very much of a 1936 movie, Things to Come.

It was based on a book by H.G.Wells, and the film itself is available in the public domain.

Posted: **Fri Mar 02, 2007 8:12 pm**

...huh???

this is coming off the top of my head apo!

Posted: **Fri Mar 02, 2007 8:38 pm**

I'm not suggesting otherwise, Kelly!

I'm comparing your work to that of a renowned science fiction writer.

Posted: **Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:46 am**

sorry if I sounded mad! I'm not!
I was shocked that you were compairing me to a famous scifi writer.

Posted: **Sun Mar 04, 2007 6:46 pm**

very good work kelly!!!!!

Lonelygirl15

killthesmiley - "The Tale Of Two Sides (3)"

killthesmiley - "The Tale Of Two Sides (3)"