Lonelygirl15

okay so I listened to all of your feedback and redesigned my TShirt.

Like you guys said, I redrew her in a more "Bree-like" pose...

I know someone wanted me to draw her with her hat...but I'd already started my drawing when I saw that...and now I'm way too tired to ever draw bree again. sorry! (maybe i'll do it a week from now..that hat is damn cute)

someone also suggested that I put the Play-Button on TOP...I tried it, it looked really weird...so I moved it back. sorry!

The new version is Anti-Aliased too (if anyone knows what that means).
if you don't, trust me....it's essential when you're planning to turn an image into a T-shirt

(and I REALLY REALLY hope they like my design and DO turn it into a tshirt)

so here's the new version:
(click on it to make it full size)



my ONLY question is...

should I keep the lonelygirl15.com logo when I submit?
otherwise it'll look a bit more dramatic, like this...



oh and just in case anyone prefers the OLD one...let me know NOW..i'm submitting in like a day or so:

i like the new one without the logo... except for the clevage, thats kinda weird.. other than that it looks really good really sharp. you must have worked your butt off!

GoodGollyItsHolly wrote:i like the new one without the logo... except for the clevage, thats kinda weird.. other than that it looks really good really sharp. you must have worked your butt off!

haha! you have a GOOD point...there really shouldn't be cleavage...
I've been drawing realistically lately sooo...I guess it slipped...
oops!

it's easily removable though..
and thanks, it def. took some work! I'll mark that as one vote for No-Logo.

P.S.
here's what it'd look like minus the cleavage:

Much better!

the whole thing looks great, and now that the boobies are done it looks perfect!

how do you do that?

awesome, curriguy!

Kasdeja wrote:awesome, curriguy!

Agreed.

Well done, mate.

I still really really really really like it. just so you know

Genius man pure genius!

thanks everyone!

edit: I'm gonna try to make a danielbeast one...
we'll see if I get the time

they are awesome!!!!

Really good much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

Reb wrote:Really good much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

I agree ..

Reb wrote:Really good much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

It definately adds realism but
I want the shirt to appeal to as broad of an audience as possible.

I figure it's better to err on the side of safety...rather than potentially offend/discourage potential buyers?

Also, a little bit of realism can easily be sacrificed given that this is a cartoon

I still think she could be looking more happy in the pic, and I think the color of the arrow would look better if it matched her shirt, or maybe if it was just plain white. and I say, no logo.