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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:01 pm
by lonelyelendi
Guess I am not so good at writing non-stereotypical women...that's a problem...I should work on that.
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:02 pm
by Ziola
lonelyelendi wrote:Yea, that is what I was thinking. I seem to be stuck in this whole satire thing...the reason I made it so stereotypical was to make it into a commentary on the way sex (and sexuality) is used less as a means of expressing love and more as a tool.
Why am I on this damned soapbox? Could someone help me down?
I understand what you are trying to accomplish. It just seems so...I don't know...done before? I don't think that is the word I want, I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:03 pm
by jc_gypsy7
hehe.. Kenny... 9 out of 10 females of my acquaintance.. (and yours, take a look around the women in this chatroom, you have a good mixture!).. do not use guys. Yes, we laugh at you all.. cause you ARE funny! But our hearts are kind.. not mean. that's the difference between us and the woman in your monologue.
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:04 pm
by lonelyelendi
Yeah, I know what you mean. Like I am the first one ever to point out this flaw in our world...I seem to be stuck on it though...not sure why.
But like I said, I really need to learn to write realistic women...
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:06 pm
by jc_gypsy7
(Add to this that Ed states that, unequivocally, there are women like you are portraying.. but unless you're rich.. they wouldn't waste their time. A guys point of view, lol!)
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:06 pm
by Cloud_ax
Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
now you know how i feel all the time. lol.
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:07 pm
by lonelyelendi
jc_gypsy7 wrote:(Add to this that Ed states that, unequivocally, there are women like you are portraying.. but unless you're rich.. they wouldn't waste their time. A guys point of view, lol!)
LOL! True...btw who is ed?
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:11 pm
by Cloud_ax
Ed is Gypsy's signicicant other.
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:11 pm
by lonelyelendi
AH! I thought so but I wasn't sure!
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:12 pm
by Cloud_ax
glad i could clear it up for you?
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:13 pm
by lonelyelendi
Speaking of gypsy...where did she run off to?
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:14 pm
by Ziola
Cloud_ax wrote:Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
now you know how i feel all the time. lol.
Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.
Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:15 pm
by jc_gypsy7
hehe, thanks cloud!
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:17 pm
by jc_gypsy7
Ziola wrote:Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.
Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...
omg Ziola.. ok, tell me the truth. Are you drinking.. taking drugs??? A MAN do HOUSEWORK??!!...
*collapsed in laughter at the thought... *
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:18 pm
by lonelyelendi
Ziola wrote:Cloud_ax wrote:Ziola wrote:I just can't seem to get my brain to work tonight.
now you know how i feel all the time. lol.
Nah...I am regularly struck down with the dumb. It is a terrible afflication that I have.
Kenny, perhaps if you were to have her joke about how she wishes it was that easy to get him to do housework, instead of the repetitive asking to the point of nagging...
Ah-HA! And therein lies the beauty of being a member of a forum populated by so many intelligent yet stunningly-beautiful women!
You are a genius Ziola!