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- marlasinger
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i spent ten minutes just now, and i think it's the fact that jonas' face is just too long in my drawing. does that make sense?
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i think it's more so the width. Jonas has a long-ish face but it's thin.marlasinger wrote:i spent ten minutes just now, and i think it's the fact that jonas' face is just too long in my drawing. does that make sense?
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I think you are right, Marlasinger, about the face being tall in the drawing, and maybe there is some subtle tweaks to the shading around the nose and brow and chin line that could make it more recognizably Jonas ... maybe lip/brow/eye shapes? Did I leave anything out? Maybe it's the blue complexion, lol.
Faces are subtle. This drawing is cool - you should just keep it and maybe if you want to try sketching Jonas again from scratch a few times to see if you can 'capture' him the way you did Bree.
I couldn't draw a can of soup.
Faces are subtle. This drawing is cool - you should just keep it and maybe if you want to try sketching Jonas again from scratch a few times to see if you can 'capture' him the way you did Bree.
I couldn't draw a can of soup.
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okay i'm going to try it again, and we'll figure out the main features of jonas's face.
i'm thinking his main features are the space between his eyes, the tip of his nose, his upper lip, and his jawline/chin - he's got a dimple in his chin that I didn't draw.
Updates soon.
M
i'm thinking his main features are the space between his eyes, the tip of his nose, his upper lip, and his jawline/chin - he's got a dimple in his chin that I didn't draw.
Updates soon.
M
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may I make a suggestion?
On Bree/Rogue's face, the nose blends in with her left cheek/eye ocket area. Maybe a little bit more of a definition with some light shading there would work to seperate
(it's either that or her eye is squished)
On Bree/Rogue's face, the nose blends in with her left cheek/eye ocket area. Maybe a little bit more of a definition with some light shading there would work to seperate
(it's either that or her eye is squished)
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These are way beyond WOW!!
Have the Dynamic Trio seen these gorgeous things yet? You know Daniel's gonna want to be included!
Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but...
(sometimes my poor little brain cell goes into over-drive...and sometimes under-drive is more like it...guess what today is!)
Have the Dynamic Trio seen these gorgeous things yet? You know Daniel's gonna want to be included!

Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but...

(sometimes my poor little brain cell goes into over-drive...and sometimes under-drive is more like it...guess what today is!)
Diane, or cher, or even chershaytoute, but "Hey, you!" works, too...
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1) more definition at Bree's nose, can do.

2) BRAVO! Very Andy Warhol, QtheC. Awesome.
3)The can of soup was just a challenge that Q took himself up on, after mentioning he can't draw.
4) Daniel is most def. included, he'll be Gambit.
Just spoke to Yousef about it and Gambit works really well, so that's what we're going with. 

2) BRAVO! Very Andy Warhol, QtheC. Awesome.
3)The can of soup was just a challenge that Q took himself up on, after mentioning he can't draw.
4) Daniel is most def. included, he'll be Gambit.


my love tastes a lot like tofu.
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http://one.revver.com/watch/330795
"Also... im in ur canons... supporting all ur marlas."
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nice
These are fun.
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Lowered above, I do love the way you think!! But, uh, let's just keep it to tomato, okay...?QtheC wrote:Actually, it's a Soup-er hero!chershaytoute wrote:Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but...![]()
Daniel could be "all that, and a can of soup!" as they say, in um, cool places where cool people say things.

Diane, or cher, or even chershaytoute, but "Hey, you!" works, too...
WWggD - let's make the Breeniverse a better place to live...
Thanks to giddeanx for the coolest personal glue stick ever!
WWggD - let's make the Breeniverse a better place to live...
Thanks to giddeanx for the coolest personal glue stick ever!