Sooo here is what i'm thinking...

betz28 · Post by **betz28** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 3:32 pm

i absolutely love it....great creativity! would love to see it happen

Killthesmiley · Post by **Killthesmiley** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:11 pm

krmurr87 wrote:this is why I love forum people! that was great Kel you should write!! lol

i do write...but why they haven't hired me on still remains unanswered.

Post by **wintermute** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:16 pm

Killthesmiley wrote:i do write...but why they haven't hired me on still remains unanswered.

Maybe their lack of ability to pay you?

'mute

Killthesmiley · Post by **Killthesmiley** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:17 pm

wintermute wrote:
Killthesmiley wrote:i do write...but why they haven't hired me on still remains unanswered.
Maybe their lack of ability to pay you?

'mute

i would totally do it for 10 bucks a week

Post by **wintermute** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:19 pm

Killthesmiley wrote:i would totally do it for 10 bucks a week

They no longer have a reason not to hire you

'mute

Killthesmiley · Post by **Killthesmiley** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:19 pm

wintermute wrote:
Killthesmiley wrote:i would totally do it for 10 bucks a week
They no longer have a reason not to hire you

'mute

i know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

krmurr87 · Post by **krmurr87** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:08 pm

Killthesmiley wrote:
wintermute wrote:
Killthesmiley wrote:i would totally do it for 10 bucks a week
They no longer have a reason not to hire you

'mute
i know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good so we're agreed! lol

Post by **wintermute** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:40 pm

krmurr87 wrote:
Killthesmiley wrote:
wintermute wrote: They no longer have a reason not to hire you

'mute
i know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good so we're agreed! lol

Oh Creators! We have a new writer for your team!

'mute

ApotheosisAZ · Post by **ApotheosisAZ** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:47 pm

Kelly, I really like some of your ideas! I think they should hire you.

MrsCop · Post by **MrsCop** » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:47 pm

ApotheosisAZ wrote:Kelly, I really like some of your ideas! I think they should hire you.

I agree 110%. They should hire nobackspace too, tho, because I sincerely believe the two of you together, well, omg.. you'd be terrific partners in crime! In case this post is taken out of context, let me just add this:

I AM NOT JOKING!

livelongandprosper77 · Sat Dec 30, 2006 12:45 am

Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!

setting hotel lobby

Bree's father is sitting down waiting. Bree walks in, looks around spots her father. He stands up and stars shaking his head as if saying "no". You cut to a shot of bree and she's expressing like..."wtf???" YOu see behind her Gemma and Lucy coming from the shadows. As they get too close for comfort, Bree's father yells "RUN BREE!!!" Bree turns around, runs towards her father. As this is happening "Tachyon and brother jump out and grab Lucy and Gemma and start to "fight" with them. Bree gets to her father and starts to pull on him, but Bree's mother comes out, and starts to pull her father in the other direction yelling "The deacons are going to Kill you, what were you thinking??", Bree's yelling "Com'on dad, lets go we can run." daniel and jonas are sitting in the parking lot (or whatever they have there), trying to stay out of sight from bree. Daniel witnesses what is going down and jups out of the SUV, and run towards the hotel to save the day, but out of a black lincon a deacon jumps out and grabs daniel. He attempts to fight back, but the deacon is stronger. Jonas then jumps out, grabs the deacon and punches him in the face. Daniel and Jonas rush to bree, and grab her her father loosens from BRee's mother and runs with Daniel Jonas and BRee back to the SUV. They Drive off.
Cut to a deserted road...
They are driving. Jonas is freaking out: "They're still following us." We cut to view a light blue ford type car in the rear-view mirror. Daniel Bree are yelling at jonas to keep driving, but Jonas slams on the breaks, and gets out. He starts yelling at the people in the car and walks up to the car and slams on the hood of the car. Kicks the grill, ect ect ...attacks it. Tachyon and Brother step out of the car. BRee's father steps out of the SUV. Daniel and BRee get out. Daniel screams at the People "WHO ARE YOU! STOP FOLLOWING US."
Tachyon says...
"You know me as Tachyon."

end video

Wow

this is one of the most awesome and interesting posts i have read thus far. What writing geez can i have your autograph please?!? Fantastic work!

lonelyelendi · Post by **lonelyelendi** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 12:55 am

I would watch that a million times!

nobackspacebutton · Post by **nobackspacebutton** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:30 am

MrsCop wrote:
ApotheosisAZ wrote:Kelly, I really like some of your ideas! I think they should hire you.
I agree 110%. They should hire nobackspace too, tho, because I sincerely believe the two of you together, well, omg.. you'd be terrific partners in crime! In case this post is taken out of context, let me just add this:

I AM NOT JOKING!

Definately ^_^ We both rock. I'm glad you all like them.

Killthesmiley · Post by **Killthesmiley** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:23 am

>>>>>>>>totally always wanted to become a screenwriter<<<<<<<<<<<

SEE ME MILES!!! YUP ME!!!!

would totally do it for less then 10 bucks a week ... for the first little while.
I took journalism in college...
i miss my creative writing...

Killthesmiley · Post by **Killthesmiley** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:27 am

sorry to dbl post...but i would love it if someone storyboarded that. i would, but i have no scanner so it would be a waste of time...
so if someone is good at drawing storyboards...that would but ultimately the highest of all high awesomeness.