Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 9:18 pm
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Not much time for you to train
beaten to it, sorry..
Not much time for you to train
beaten to it, sorry..
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Whoa, you got there WAY before I did... haha. Awesome.meghan2 wrote:not much time for you to train
agreed!mLe wrote:Should be:toadlguy wrote:2nd line is wrong - needs 4 words and gates doesn't rhyme with fategrantsnx wrote:ELEVEN DAYS UNTIL MY FATE
MEET ME JUST INSIDE THE GATES
TON MICHEMUT OURFOY TAINOTR,
SLILT KOUYCIB ENDAR CAPLIMON.
HALLETEK WHITIT SIGNA SEPHREAL:
ELEVEN DAYS, ELEVEN DAYS
What we have so far??
Eleven days until my fate
meets me just inside the gate
tonmichemut ourfoy tainotr
Still you bicker and complain
halletek whitit signa sephreal
eleven days, eleven days
Yeah... you're right... a trochee is an inverted iamb, though... and we all know Cassie's a big fan of inverting thingsubergeek wrote:Seems like not all the feet here are iambs. Beginning of line two is a trochee.
EDIT: Also, "not much time for you to train" has 7 beats...it can't be iambic quadrameter with seven beats. Not to mention the beginning of this line isn't iambic at all. Just don't want to go down the wrong track here...
Even if you ignore the several exceptions to iambic meter in the poem thus far, "not much time for you to train" doesn't fit either iambic or trochee meter.EmilyElle wrote:Yeah... you're right... a trochee is an inverted iamb, though... and we all know Cassie's a big fan of inverting thingsubergeek wrote:Seems like not all the feet here are iambs. Beginning of line two is a trochee.
EDIT: Also, "not much time for you to train" has 7 beats...it can't be iambic quadrameter with seven beats. Not to mention the beginning of this line isn't iambic at all. Just don't want to go down the wrong track here...
There's an L in the "singing praise" though...alexisme wrote:ELEVEN DAYS UNTIL MY FATE
MEET ME JUST INSIDE THE GATES
TON MICHEMUT OURFOY TAINOTR,
STILL YOU BICKER AND COMPLAIN.
HALLETEK WHITIT SINGING PRAISE:
ELEVEN DAYS, ELEVEN DAYS