Lonelygirl15

Btw, just so someone doesn't get excited and make another topic

You don't like the attempted exorcism line?

she'll breath a leek, it turns and hides

(I don't actually - but - I got nothin)

Just a summary, we have . . .

The evil priest will make the bed
While the victim nods her head.
Once she's bound, too late to quit,
She'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit.
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
She tried she lied she cried she died.

That right so far?

EDIT: JerseyJohnny beat me to it!
EDIT: Line 4

JohnnyCon wrote:Just a summary, we have . . .

The evil priest will make the bed
While the victim nods her head.
Once she's bound, too late to quit,
His flesh shall need, HATELESS SHITS TIPL.
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
She tried she lied she cried she died.

That right so far?

1THE EVIL PRIEST SHALL MAKE THE BED
2WHILE THE VICTIM NODS HER HED
3ONCE SHE'S BOUND, TOO LATE TO QUIT,
4she'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit
5
6She tried she lied she cried she died.[

JerseyJohnny wrote:Here's where we're at, so far, you guys - I think it looks good, let's slam home this final pain in the ass line!!!

The evil priest will make the bed,
while the victim nods her head,
Once she's bound, too late to quit
she'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit,
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
she tried, she lied, she cried, she died

i like this best

JohnnyCon wrote:Just a summary, we have . . .

The evil priest will make the bed
While the victim nods her head.
Once she's bound, too late to quit,
His flesh shall need, HATELESS SHITS TIPL.
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
She tried she lied she cried she died.

That right so far?

EDIT: JerseyJohnny beat me to it!

she'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit, for line four

This works better . . .

The evil priest will make the bed
While the victim nods her head.
Once she's bound, too late to quit,
she'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit.
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
She tried she lied she cried she died.

EDIT: Multiple trout - It's just like fishin'

Remember everyone the next to last line has to rhyme with "died" not "dies".

toadlguy wrote:This works better . . .

The evil priest will make the bed
While the victim nods her head.
Once she's bound, too late to quit,
she'll feel his hands, she'll taste his spit.
HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
She tried she lied she cried she died.

That right so far?

[/quote]

Yes

... shut inside...

The two things we've gotten for the second half are "stand hurt inside" and "it turns and hides."

....t and hurts Inside

toadlguy wrote:

veriteblesse wrote:Well, if it's an aabbcc rhyme, and the last line contains tried, lied, cried, and died, what rhyming word is left for the second to last line?

I'm working with "hide" or "hides"

"it runs and hides" but there is an extra t

I MIGHT have part of that darned 5th line!!! The latter half, thanks to your posts, toadlguy and veriteblesse!

How's this:

DA DE HUTINS TRINS = STAND HURT INSIDE

?????

Now we just need to figure see if "HABLERA SHEKEL TEL" can form something that would fit it or make sense with it...

EDIT: DAMN, I'm too slow!!!

HELVETE PI TRIS DA WEB HE MEL KILT
the evil priest will make the bed
WELCHE HI MIT VIT DA SHED HERON.
while the victim nods her head
DEBUCHES NON OS, LOQUETAIT TOTO,
Once she's bound too late to quit
DA SHELFS EH NELLS HI, HATELESS SHITS TIPL.
She'll feel his hands she'll taste his spit

HABLERA SHEKEL TEL DA DE HUTINS TRINS,
and truths inside
it turns and hides
and thrust inside

DEDIE HE RHES SLIT DECEDE SHED HI SIR.
she tried she lied, she cried she died.

frustrating... some suggestions... I'm leaning towards the last one, but I can't make the first half fit

and truths inside ???