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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:39 pm
by tigerlilylynn
iamcool wrote:
tigerlilylynn wrote:
iamcool wrote:Iris' friend : hey i think its bed time, good night iris

Iris: good night

Iris' friend: iris, whats the touching my bum?
*sporfle*
what does sporfle mean? lol
it's a laughing sound <3

Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:07 pm
by TJ Marsh
:lol: :lol:

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 9:17 pm
by voyboy
Scene opens with Iris in the tub and while his Father is questioning his odd behavior.

Dad: What's been the matter the past few days?

IRIS: I'm sorry I've troubled you. I don't want to worry you. I don't want to worry anyone.

Dad: Is it all on account of...because of Bree? Because she
doesn't call for you anymore?


IRIS: I don't know. I don't know, Dad.

Dad: I have a mind to call that girl and tell her....

IRIS: (sitting up furiously and screaming) Don't you dare! Don't you dare, Dad! (He covers her face with both hands and lies back down into the tub - and then tries asserts himself, with his right hand covering his mouth.) Don't you dare! Don't you dare!...No, Dad! Daddy, if you do something like that, I'll do something desperate! I will, I will, Dad! I will!

Dad: (standing over him) Iris, how serious had you and Bree become? I mean, well, you know what I mean. Iris- had she - had anything serious happened? Did she - did she spoil you?

IRIS: (raging and laughing hysterically and uncontrollably) Spoil??? Did she spoil me? (He turns and submerges his head under the steaming water. He flails around and then sits up again.) No. No, Dad! (hatefully) I'm not spoiled! I'm not spoiled, Dad! I'm just as fresh and I'm virginal like the day I was born, Dad!

Dad: Stop it! Stop it!

IRIS: I'm a lovely virginal creature who wouldn't think of being spoiled! (He stands up in the tub and steps out with his arms outstretched.) I've been a good little boy, Dad! I've been a good little, good little, good little boy! I've always done everything Daddy and Mommy tell me. I've obeyed every word. I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU!

Father runs out of bathroom in tears.
(Fade to black)

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:14 pm
by TJ Marsh
:lol:

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:15 pm
by voyboy
Iris,

I wrote that lovely script and you just laugh? Its a very serious drama.

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:41 pm
by TJ Marsh
I Laughed because i like it, never know what me and the Crew will choose :wink:

Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 1:35 am
by licoricesniper
Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks.

Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:19 pm
by voyboy
licoricesniper wrote:Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks.
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL

Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:14 pm
by licoricesniper
voyboy wrote:
licoricesniper wrote:Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks.
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL
That's right, keep it weenie free, okay?

Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:16 pm
by licoricesniper
voyboy wrote:
licoricesniper wrote:Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks.
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL
That's right, keep it weenie free, okay?

Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:31 pm
by TJ Marsh
Darn, lol

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:36 am
by Brucker
Let's poll on it.

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:04 pm
by TJ Marsh
A transcript has been chosen and will be up on the 16 of Feb. The name will be posted that day.
Thanks all that submit one.

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:08 pm
by voyboy
Iris2009 wrote:A transcript has been chosen and will be up on the 16 of Feb. The name will be posted that day.
Thanks all that submit one.
please send my residual checks to:


Mr. V. Boy
c/o William Morris Agency
Literary Dept.
Beverly Hills CA 90210

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:46 pm
by Killthesmiley
Mr. V. Boy
to me that reads "Mr Vagina Boy"

....lmao. I loves you V.Boy!