Lonelygirl15

Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!

setting hotel lobby

Bree's father is sitting down waiting. Bree walks in, looks around spots her father. He stands up and stars shaking his head as if saying "no". You cut to a shot of bree and she's expressing like..."wtf???" YOu see behind her Gemma and Lucy coming from the shadows. As they get too close for comfort, Bree's father yells "RUN BREE!!!" Bree turns around, runs towards her father. As this is happening "Tachyon and brother jump out and grab Lucy and Gemma and start to "fight" with them. Bree gets to her father and starts to pull on him, but Bree's mother comes out, and starts to pull her father in the other direction yelling "The deacons are going to Kill you, what were you thinking??", Bree's yelling "Com'on dad, lets go we can run." daniel and jonas are sitting in the parking lot (or whatever they have there), trying to stay out of sight from bree. Daniel witnesses what is going down and jups out of the SUV, and run towards the hotel to save the day, but out of a black lincon a deacon jumps out and grabs daniel. He attempts to fight back, but the deacon is stronger. Jonas then jumps out, grabs the deacon and punches him in the face. Daniel and Jonas rush to bree, and grab her her father loosens from BRee's mother and runs with Daniel Jonas and BRee back to the SUV. They Drive off.
Cut to a deserted road...
They are driving. Jonas is freaking out: "They're still following us." We cut to view a light blue ford type car in the rear-view mirror. Daniel Bree are yelling at jonas to keep driving, but Jonas slams on the breaks, and gets out. He starts yelling at the people in the car and walks up to the car and slams on the hood of the car. Kicks the grill, ect ect ...attacks it. Tachyon and Brother step out of the car. BRee's father steps out of the SUV. Daniel and BRee get out. Daniel screams at the People "WHO ARE YOU! STOP FOLLOWING US."
Tachyon says...
"You know me as Tachyon."

end video

quoting it to boost my ego!
it's awesomeness to the T

Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!

[snip video 'description']

end video

*blinks a few times* WTF??? LOL

Youse got problems, girlie... I luv ya... but youse got problems... ... i-ssues!!!

next thing you know the black lincoln pulls up. In the driver's seat is Bree's dad badly beaten up... Tachy and brother are in the back seat. Bree's dad looks up at the group and says "Bree... meet your brother and sister..."

kageyuki wrote:I think you've got waaay too much time on your hands, Kel. Love ya, but waaay too much time, hun...

I've had my own speculations, but not enough to have a storyboard mapped out in my head and ready for filming...

Too much time, Mr. 1300+ posts averaging 45 per day?

I think it's a great theory, and it would tie everything together, as the Creators have promised.

kageyuki wrote:

Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!

[snip video 'description']

end video

*blinks a few times* WTF??? LOL

Youse got problems, girlie... I luv ya... but youse got problems... ... i-ssues!!!

next thing you know the black lincoln pulls up. In the driver's seat is Bree's dad badly beaten up... Tachy and brother are in the back seat. Bree's dad looks up at the group and says "Bree... meet your brother and sister..."

NOOOOO
bree's dad is with daniel bree and jonas!

Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!

setting hotel lobby

Bree's father is sitting down waiting. Bree walks in, looks around spots her father. He stands up and stars shaking his head as if saying "no". You cut to a shot of bree and she's expressing like..."wtf???" YOu see behind her Gemma and Lucy coming from the shadows. As they get too close for comfort, Bree's father yells "RUN BREE!!!" Bree turns around, runs towards her father. As this is happening "Tachyon and brother jump out and grab Lucy and Gemma and start to "fight" with them. Bree gets to her father and starts to pull on him, but Bree's mother comes out, and starts to pull her father in the other direction yelling "The deacons are going to Kill you, what were you thinking??", Bree's yelling "Com'on dad, lets go we can run." daniel and jonas are sitting in the parking lot (or whatever they have there), trying to stay out of sight from bree. Daniel witnesses what is going down and jups out of the SUV, and run towards the hotel to save the day, but out of a black lincon a deacon jumps out and grabs daniel. He attempts to fight back, but the deacon is stronger. Jonas then jumps out, grabs the deacon and punches him in the face. Daniel and Jonas rush to bree, and grab her her father loosens from BRee's mother and runs with Daniel Jonas and BRee back to the SUV. They Drive off.
Cut to a deserted road...
They are driving. Jonas is freaking out: "They're still following us." We cut to view a light blue ford type car in the rear-view mirror. Daniel Bree are yelling at jonas to keep driving, but Jonas slams on the breaks, and gets out. He starts yelling at the people in the car and walks up to the car and slams on the hood of the car. Kicks the grill, ect ect ...attacks it. Tachyon and Brother step out of the car. BRee's father steps out of the SUV. Daniel and BRee get out. Daniel screams at the People "WHO ARE YOU! STOP FOLLOWING US."
Tachyon says...
"You know me as Tachyon."

end video

Okay..I think I got it now.


[Enter Bree]

[Dad sitting in big black chair in middle of white room]

Dad: Hello Bree.

Bree: Your not my Dad...

Dad: Yes...its me. I'm God---errr--your father.

Bree: But your black.

Dad: Racist?

Bree: ...no...its just...your different...

Dad: The order thought this look would be more appealing..

[Enter Cassie]

Cassie: BREE! HES NOT YOUR FATHER! HES ALIESTER CROWLEY REINCARNATED!!!

Bree: Cassie! What happened to you

Cassie: ?! I ... I .. I had to go away for a while Bree...Um...I....

[Enter Lucy and Gemma]

Gemma: Back off away from God Bree!

Bree: God??

Lucy: duh. Your dad.

Lucy: And stay away from that girl..she's insane.

Cassie: I"M NOT CRAZYY!!!

Dad: Usually when someone has to scream their not crazy..they usually are..

Bree: well..wheres mom?

Dad: I have something to tell you bree...

Lucy: Don't!

Dad: Lucy is your mother.

Bree: WHAT?

Dad: Its true...your other mother was just my sister.

[Enter Daniel]

Daniel: WTF? THATS F-ING GROSS MAN

Dad: Look it was the 80's....

Daniel: Uh-huh

Bree: Daniel lets get out of here!!

[Enter Jonas]

Jonas: THE GIRL IS MINE!!

Daniel: Dude. Just take Cassie. She's kinda hot.

[Jonas and Cassie look at each other]

Jonas: Okay!

Cassie: OH BABY

Bree: But Daniel!!

Daniel *TO BREE*: I'm sure those crazies will be fine...don't worry...lets get out of here!

[BREE AND DANIEL RUN OUTSIDE]

[WATCHER STANDS WAITING ON THE SIDEWALK WITH GEMMA]

Bree: How'd she get out here?

[Gemma looks at them]

Gemma: Yo Bitch Get Off Mah Sidewalk! Dis is my client Yo!

Daniel: Jesus. Its her alternate personality Gemmalicious.

Bree: The forum guys are going to love this.

Daniel: Hurry! Run!

[WATCHER SEES THEM]

Watcher: STOP!

Bree: OMG! DANIEL!

[Daniel side kicks the watcher and double back flips into the air]

Daniel: FOUR YEARS OF TAEKWONDO B'OTCH!

Bree: damn. Your good.

Daniel: I know.

Bree: So what do we do now?

Daniel: Wanna post a video?

Bree: Sure...but of what?

Danie: of this? everything that just happened! I want everyone to see me kick ass!

Bree: But no one was taping...

[Enter Tachyon]

Daniel: Bree...I'd like you to meet my sister.

Tachyon: Yo.

[END VIDEO]

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NO

Killthesmiley wrote:.....


NO

But --- but!

Luv2Skydive wrote:

kageyuki wrote:I think you've got waaay too much time on your hands, Kel. Love ya, but waaay too much time, hun...

I've had my own speculations, but not enough to have a storyboard mapped out in my head and ready for filming...

Too much time, Mr. 1300+ posts averaging 45 per day?

I think it's a great theory, and it would tie everything together, as the Creators have promised.

Hey, I never said she was the only one... besides 45 a day isn't nearly as bad as a couple other people I've seen around here, who I shall not name...

I'M THE BEST I WROTE THE SCRIPT...
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AND I POST LIKE CRAZY MAD!

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lol...i'm in a goofy mood today!

kageyuki wrote:

Luv2Skydive wrote:

kageyuki wrote:I think you've got waaay too much time on your hands, Kel. Love ya, but waaay too much time, hun...

I've had my own speculations, but not enough to have a storyboard mapped out in my head and ready for filming...

Too much time, Mr. 1300+ posts averaging 45 per day?

I think it's a great theory, and it would tie everything together, as the Creators have promised.

Hey, I never said she was the only one... besides 45 a day isn't nearly as bad as a couple other people I've seen around here, who I shall not name...

your not talking about me

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Killthesmiley wrote:I'M THE BEST I WROTE THE SCRIPT...
ME
ME
ME
ME
ME
ME
ME

AND I POST LIKE CRAZY MAD!

ME
ME
ME
ME
ME

lol...i'm in a goofy mood today!

....... like I said.. problems...

BA-chan wrote:

kageyuki wrote:Hey, I never said she was the only one... besides 45 a day isn't nearly as bad as a couple other people I've seen around here, who I shall not name...

your not talking about me

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No, not talking about you, dear...

ok back on topic...

so what do you think?

Killthesmiley wrote:ok back on topic...

so what do you think?

I think mines better.

Killthesmiley wrote:ok back on topic...

so what do you think?

Honestly. I think it's awesom, Kel! Great job!