quoting it to boost my ego!Killthesmiley wrote:alright here is what I would do...
but i don't write for them!
setting hotel lobby
Bree's father is sitting down waiting. Bree walks in, looks around spots her father. He stands up and stars shaking his head as if saying "no". You cut to a shot of bree and she's expressing like..."wtf???" YOu see behind her Gemma and Lucy coming from the shadows. As they get too close for comfort, Bree's father yells "RUN BREE!!!" Bree turns around, runs towards her father. As this is happening "Tachyon and brother jump out and grab Lucy and Gemma and start to "fight" with them. Bree gets to her father and starts to pull on him, but Bree's mother comes out, and starts to pull her father in the other direction yelling "The deacons are going to Kill you, what were you thinking??", Bree's yelling "Com'on dad, lets go we can run." daniel and jonas are sitting in the parking lot (or whatever they have there), trying to stay out of sight from bree. Daniel witnesses what is going down and jups out of the SUV, and run towards the hotel to save the day, but out of a black lincon a deacon jumps out and grabs daniel. He attempts to fight back, but the deacon is stronger. Jonas then jumps out, grabs the deacon and punches him in the face. Daniel and Jonas rush to bree, and grab her her father loosens from BRee's mother and runs with Daniel Jonas and BRee back to the SUV. They Drive off.
Cut to a deserted road...
They are driving. Jonas is freaking out: "They're still following us." We cut to view a light blue ford type car in the rear-view mirror. Daniel Bree are yelling at jonas to keep driving, but Jonas slams on the breaks, and gets out. He starts yelling at the people in the car and walks up to the car and slams on the hood of the car. Kicks the grill, ect ect ...attacks it. Tachyon and Brother step out of the car. BRee's father steps out of the SUV. Daniel and BRee get out. Daniel screams at the People "WHO ARE YOU! STOP FOLLOWING US."
Tachyon says...
"You know me as Tachyon."
end video
it's awesomeness to the T
*blinks a few times* WTF??? LOL 
?! I ... I .. I had to go away for a while Bree...Um...I....
Yo.
But --- but!