Lonelygirl15

Oh, I was under the impression that the story was already written. But that was just me assuming.

My arse they make this up as they go along...they have a template and improvise from there...but they KNOW where they are going in general..
TRUST NO ONE!

Wait so they haven't actually said that they make it up as they go? Because It seems like a lot of planning has gone into the story.

Evan-
I know you didn't want to continue discussing this ee cummings poem, but it can add an insightful look into a relationship between two people who are outcasts. (like Bree & Cassie?--my wild speculation).

by E. E. Cummings

anyone lived in a pretty how town

(with up so floating many bells down)

spring summer autumn winter

he sang his didn't he danced his did



Women and men(both little and small)

cared for anyone not at all

they sowed their isn't they reaped their same

sun moon stars rain



children guessed(but only a few

and down they forgot as up they grew

autumn winter spring summer)

that noone loved him more by more



when by now and tree by leaf

she laughed his joy she cried his grief

bird by snow and stir by still

anyone's any was all to her



someones married their everyones

laughed their cryings and did their dance

(sleep wake hope and then)they

said their nevers they slept their dream



stars rain sun moon

(and only the snow can begin to explain

how children are apt to forget to remember

with up so floating many bells down)



one day anyone died i guess

(and noone stooped to kiss his face)

busy folk buried them side by side

little by little and was by was



all by all and deep by deep

and more by more they dream their sleep

noone and anyone earth by april

wish by spirit and if by yes.



Women and men(both dong and ding)

summer autumn winter spring

reaped their sowing and went their came

sun moon stars rain

This poem is about a town where Noone and Anyone lives. Anyone is viewed suspiciously by everyone else because of Anyone’s individuality. The townschildren, in their youth, are willing to accept Anyone and Noone’s love for each other. However, as they grow up, the children conform. They behave like the men and women in the town, fearing Anyone’s individuality. Anyone dies and Noone sadly dies later. They are buried “side by side” continuing to live and love in the afterlife.
However, the townspeople continued their unemotional, rather empty lives thinking little of this pair. They continued to live in the world, not really paying attention that everything that is beautiful in the world, like “sun, moon, stars, rain.”

wintermute wrote:

Evan wrote:anyone lived in a pretty how town

Change that to "Cow Town" and we're in my neck of the woods! (Columbus, Ohio is 1/2 hour away. No idea how it got that nickname)

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How now, brown cow?