On the Jumping of Sharks--What LG15 is Doing Wrong

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EliCash wrote:
Which brings up the question of "Why bother to pretend its like that?"
They didn't. Only days before the poll they said that this wasn't going to be "Choose your own adventure."
I meant that the situation itself gives the impression that the determination reached will be relevant. In the end, I don't think it was because 1) it was obvious where the Creators wanted it to go (which is where it should have gone) and 2) Bree ended up there at Jonas' anyway -- which is precisely what she's had her self set on for the last two weeks.
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The way that you know interactive storytelling is actually interactive storytelling is because the suggestions (call them "commands" if you prefer) of the audience actually have an impact on what follows.
THEY DID have an impact on what follows here. Did you not see Daniel actively rejecting what the majority told him to do? If not, you should watch the video again. It's all there. That's part of the story! I don't get why you don't see this. It would be contrary to Daniel's stubborn character to simply ignore what he thinks he should do based on a poll.
Again, I'm not even addressing Daniel's response to the poll. I'm just addressing the relevance of there being a poll in the first place. I can understand the notion that this tells us something about Daniel because he rejected the poll, but, again, that could have been achieved every bit as easily with the fictional forum -- and the outcome of the forum advice was never in doubt anyway. If Daniel's reaction here was the only way he could respond to the poll/Holly's decision, then his response was a foregone conclusion before the "The Test" video was ever made.

Do you see what I'm trying to say there? I think it was all probably going to happen that way anyway -- right down to Daniel's reaction. Why else pick a forum member who was an avid supporter of Jonas in the first place? I'm not saying that Holly shouldn't have been picked, because she has been a very loyal and vocal fan for months now and deserved to be picked as much as anyone. I'm just questioning the motivation behind that particular decision and what that suggests for what was intended to happen regarding the poll and, consequently, Daniel's reaction to it.
EliCash wrote:(If you want to argue it was outside of his character to have a poll in the first place, however, then I might agree. But that's a completely different argument.)
I would argue that (forum members could be plants of the Order as easily as Gemma or Jonas, after all), but I don't think we should really do much more discussion of what Daniel's reaction was to the poll until we know for sure that this whole thing wasn't just a ruse on his and Bree's part. They could have easily faked the whole "split" for all we know right now.

I'm not saying I think that's what happened, but I think it might be foolish of us to argue this or that regarding how he reacted until we know more. Honestly, my initial reaction to his behavior was "Whoa, what happened to trusting what the forum decided? It was your idea, Daniel, so what the heck?" -- but right now I don't think we know for sure that he didn't trust what they decided.

Again, this ties back into my statement that I wasn't concerned about Daniel's reaction to the whole thing so much as the notion of whether or not the outcome of the decision was ever in doubt.

Of course, I don't know that the Creators wouldn't have this split occur anyway if the poll had gone in favor of not trusting Jonas -- but, again, I think it was all stacked in favor of that (from the selection of the forum's representative to the rather black-and-white depiction of options in the poll -- despite there being more than just two options), so we'll never know anyway. I guess my point is really this: we know the Creators wanted the story to go this way. Therefore it should have gone this way. So why even make it an issue of interactivity? Pseudo or otherwise?
EliCash wrote:And by the way, my use of the word "commands" was to suggest what the poll was NOT. If it WAS "Choose your own adventure," THEN it'd be a command. That's my point. You want them to be commands, rather than actual interaction that real characters respond to in ways keeping with their character.
No, I certainly don't want that. As I said, I'd do away with the whole notion of interactive storytelling were it me. Up until after the fake ceremony, as far as most of us knew, we were just watching a story being told to us and there wasn't any interactive aspect to it anyway.
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If you look at the chat from Nov. 28th, what effect did the audience have there? Absolutely none. They weren't even needed.
I agree the chat was ridiculous. I blame a lack of preparing for the event, along with technical problems. Next time, I'd imagine, it will be much better.
But will it be relevant? That's my concern, for the purposes of this discussion anyway. I'd, of course, like it to not be a disaster again -- which it was for the reasons you've mentioned. That said, though, I do still respect the Creators for honoring their word and going through with trying the chat when they said they would, even knowing they weren't prepared.
EliCash wrote:However, I think this poll stuff is completely different. And it resulted in a fantastic video the LG community has, by huge margins, enjoyed.
I enjoyed it too. I'm not knocking on the video. It finally got the story to begin moving again and the acting was superb. I'm just addressing the notion of the whole interactive element.
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To put it another way, as many of us read/watch a story, we're shouting suggestions or commands to the characters involved, yet we might as well not being doing so for all the difference it makes.
We certainly can disagree on whether it made a "difference," but I have a different standard. That's one of interactivity. There's no denying this was actual, real interaction. That wouldn't be the case with the examples you cited.
But I would contest that this wasn't real interaction (for the reasons I've mentioned above, particularly the "stacking").
EliCash wrote:I would actually push for it to make more of a "difference" with the direction of the plot -- but not TOO much more. It's better for them to start small than big on this, in my opinion.
I agree that it's better to start small, as there's going to be some kinks to work out, and you don't want a kink in what was intended to be something huge. But if they're really going to try it, I'm going to offer my honest analysis -- and I think they've started out too small so far.
EliCash wrote:By the way, as far as this "fictional forum" stuff, it wouldn't work realistically, anyway. They would have to set up a fake forum with fake people posting and make fake polls.
Not really. They can just do what they've done before. "Some of you have said..." or "The people on the forum decided..." etc. Something like that.
EliCash wrote:Why not just use our own forum, and allow us to respond? Then they can work our response into how the characters would respond as is appropriate?
I think that they should do that -- but I think it's pointless to even bother with the notion of the forum if it's not going to make a difference we can truly see and know was relevant. Something like Daniel liking Bree. We didn't find out until way after the fact that our opinions impacted that, but that was obviously a relevant development that the viewers had a hand in. It's not something that completely changed the course of the story -- but it was relevant nonetheless. A living, breathing, walking, certified impact.
EliCash wrote:Bree ignored Gemma's advice, as well. Are you suggesting that they didn't interact in the story? You would have to, since she didn't make "a difference."
Characters who are part of the story already don't apply in the concept of interactive storytelling. She's already there, being directly interacted with, and making a consistent difference.
EliCash wrote:Edit: I just want to point out that part of LG is the OpAphid stuff, and there's no mistaking how incredibly interactive THAT is.
I agree that there's some interactivity going on there, for sure. It's too bad that's the side story, though. Then again, OpAphid is the aspect of LG15 being billed as an ARG.
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I think we both understand where the other is coming from now. Neither of us convinced the other, but that's perfectly fine. But I do have one final question (and I'm not sure I know my own answer to it).

Would this last video had been as good/important/interesting had Daniel not "rejected" the will of the forum (and "our" personal opinion as decided in a poll, rather than those of a fake forum)?

I am leaning towards it making the video better. That would be a victory for the type of interactivity I subscribe to (which is different than your version, as we've established).
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EliCash wrote:I think we both understand where the other is coming from now. Neither of us convinced the other, but that's perfectly fine.
Yeah, as long as we understand where the other's coming from and can agree to disagree, I'm fine with that too.
EliCash wrote:But I do have one final question (and I'm not sure I know my own answer to it).

Would this last video had been as good/important/interesting had Daniel not "rejected" the will of the forum (and "our" personal opinion as decided in a poll, rather than those of a fake forum)?

I am leaning towards it making the video better. That would be a victory for the type of interactivity I subscribe to (which is different than your version, as we've established).
You certainly went for a good question there. It's true that we were defining interactivity differently, so that may or may not play into how we would answer.

I guess for some people Daniel's departure was more shocking because of the poll -- especially since we, the fans, voted in it. Since I'm always thinking in terms of how stories are developing, I don't think it hit me like it did those people. I don't personally feel like my surprise was influenced in any way by the poll or Holly's role -- but I've also not been giving much weight to them in terms of relevance to the story. I've felt like for a while that the story was going to move to Jonas' no matter what the fans said (and I really think it's about time; I think we fans somehow contributed to the delay, or, at least, the Creators' concerns about veering from what we predicted did).

I guess I'm not really answering your question, am I? I'll try to, though.

I guess for me personally, I don't think it made a difference, but now that you've made me ponder the question, I can see how it might have contributed to a shock for other viewers. I guess I am willing to acknowledge it as more effective in light of that.

Interesting point to bring up. I'm not sure that it's something I'd classify as interactive, and I'm not sure that it's a kind of approach that would be consistently effective, but, yes, in this case, it probably was. Good thoughts. Thanks for bringing them up, and for the talk.
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EliCash wrote:
Would this last video had been as good/important/interesting had Daniel not "rejected" the will of the forum?
To me, his rejection made him look two-faced: the poll was his idea, but he brushes it off because he doesn't like the result. He leaves. This was predictable.

One could say it was out of character for HIM to be the one to suggest the poll: isn't he supposed to be the self-reliant "I know what's best" one? Now he's getting sappy about how the fans are the only ones he trusts?

Someone made a bad call.

The forum is sick of the "look how bad the situation we're not taking seriously is" vids and decided Jonas was better then more sitting around whinning. They said "go to jonas." Also predictable.

The video didn't even cronicle the details of the poll or mention the fact many said "go to Jonas but be wary." The result could have been everyone on the forum saying "No Don't Go!" and the result wouldnt have been any different. It was decided from the moment they picked Holly.

Predictable is a word that is coming to define this show.

The events of this video could have happened two weeks or so ago and we wouldn't have missed much, plus Bree and Daniel would seem more proactive.

The chat didn't need to happen. The poll didn't need to happen. The outcomes of both were easy to foresee and like Lurker said, a real forum with real people with real opinions was completely unnessesary.

All they are doing is teasing us with how little power we really have, putting us in a position where it LOOKS like we're all set to actually make a difference, then they kick the legs from under us when it becomes clear that the event was little more then a publicity stunt to try and keep us happy and occupied while the big bosses languish in financial purgatory.

(Any creators watching this, understand it's easier for me to speak my mind if I pretend you're not out there. Keeps me impartial. I'm sorry, I'm not letting you explain away the weaknesses in your story with financial problems, unless you want to track down everyone who watched the "Anti-cribs" video and explain WHY they are wierded out we didn't see any of the rooms. Either it's there or it's not. If the plot calls for something you don't have the cash to do, then maybe you need to change the story a little and be a bit more creative.)
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DreamerM wrote:Predictable is a word that is coming to define this show.
Really? Not for me. I haven't been able to predict a single plot turn (other than Bree alone with Jonas, if that has actually happened). Dreamer, can you predict for us in broad terms what the next Bree-Daniel-Jonas video will disclose?

As Voyboy said some posts back, the beauty is in not knowing.
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Oy, you whine a lot.

Just jumping into the fray here, but I agree with SharpI. Even though I'm not terribly pleased with recent turns of events, I would have to say that having Bree and Daniel become homeless living in a squat and dumpster diving for a week, Daniel deciding to poll the forum, then reject the forum's advice, then having Bree go to Jonas alone, wasn't all that predictable at all (besides Bree going to Jonas).

Seriously, if things are that predictable, tell us what will happen in the next two weeks, and then I will believe you.
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I predict bree will lay around Jonas's place while everyone else posts veage "I'm worried" videos and wrinkles thier forheads. Bree does something adorable to take her mind off things. This will continue for at least three more videos.

That's what I predict. So there.

Anyway, it was OOC for Daniel, the reliable one, to ask random strangers on the internet for advice. And regardless of what they said he was still not gonna want to go to Jonas. It was clear.

Wiether this is the beginnng of a potential professonally boring romantic triangle or just Daniel being ornery remains to be seen.
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I think there is a misunderstanding about what Lonelygirl15 is all about. This is a reality role playing game tied to an internet forum. The purpose of the videos is to move the discussion in the forums along, not a story. The experience is all about the fans creating speculation about what could happen, finding imaginary or real clues and discussing what they all could mean. As the discussion dies down, you then get another video.

Unfortunately, I think 99% of the fans think they have been sucked into a serialized graphic novel of sorts and thus the frustration. The videos don't follow any logical story telling sequence and they were never intended to. Just have fun with it.

By the way, I think Jonas is a good guy but the Order has him under their control somehow. Daniel has to be separated from Bree so he can come to the rescue later on. You can't come to the rescue if you are already there.
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The ARG arguement again.

There are plenty of things to rant at the internet about. That should not be the PURPOSE of LG15. The game should be icing on the cake, not the other way around.

You should not NEED to play the game to get a rewarding experience from this show. It should stand alone as a worthy exploration of the possibilities of this new form of storytelling.

If LG15 really is just about the ARG then I'll leave this fandom and never look back, weaping perhaps for what might have been.

"The videos don't follow any logical storytelling sequence and they were never intended to?" Then what's the friggin point?! If they arn't even trying to entertain us with a good story then why should we "just have fun with it?"

Good stories are fun. Everything else = not fun.

For the record, the ARG frustrates me. I don't have time to do any of that lame decoding stuff. Call me old-fashioned but I like things straightforward.

Maybe I'm in the wrong place for that, now that Ophaid is cannon and it's all anyone seems to be talking about since the actual LG15 plot is languishing on autopilot...
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Throw this to the rubish bin. There isn't anything LG15 is doing wrong. This is just a complaint. Stop whining.
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It's ten pages long, it would have been thrown out a long time ago if it was just "whinning."

Yes, there is stuff LG15 is doing wrong, and it is souring me on the whole experience. I intended this thread to be a one-shot thing, me getting my opinions out there and to see if anyone could prove them wrong (besides bringing up that CONFOUNDED ARG!! It doesn't prove I thing, I tell you!)

Get over it.
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I like the ARG side. I too don't have tons of time for decoding, but I like that we can interact more than just watching the videos. Although I think they pushing the ARG/interaction side a little too much in the past few vids. Especially when Daniel specifically adressed the forum members. Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge fan of the show but he basically said "Hi, this is the YouTube/Revver version of a choose your own adventure book, please come play with me::puppy eyes::" It reminds me of ALIAS when they dropped in random lines about the Ford F150 or hybrid cars (classic line for fans of that series Jack:Electric, for when you need to be quiet) For a series/ARG that's been about indirectness most of the time that was just like a plug for website hits.
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DreamerM wrote: Anyway, it was OOC for Daniel, the reliable one, to ask random strangers on the internet for advice. And regardless of what they said he was still not gonna want to go to Jonas. It was clear.
Not really. Daniel has been using the forum as a guide for awhile now, even without actively asking for advise.

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I say we wait and see the improvements of this awesome Web forum.
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Enjoy the ARG or hate the ARG, it should not be all about the ARG.

I agree the poll was a plug for website hits and not much else. These events could easily have taken place without it. That's what I'm saying. [/i]
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