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crazy awkward story

how long will it take
until i alienate
someone who once was a freind
long ago

i've said three words
that you've never heard
pessimist, secular, humanist
i do hope you aren't stupid

ask me to dance?
this isn't your chance
are you aware
that you're here with a girl?

did i mention?
this was not my intention
i'm not that mean
and i'm not that malicious
(have you heard that one?)

i was just having fun
and the true one
that i want
didn't even show up

your "date" doesn't care
she says it's the blonde hair
that you have a thing for
and she doesn't mind

she told me
that she could see
what you saw in me

i still say no
you'll have to let go
i won't do this to her
ive done enough damage.
currently chewing ice breakers sours gum

oh, it's what you do to me

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i suppose there's a lot on my mind today...

what are you trying to say?
that's the worst excuse
ever
i'd like to think it was directed at me
but for all i know
you didn't want to see your freind with that guy
which is understandable
except you said you didn't like her
you told me
you promised
i didn't make you, you just did.
well, if you have something to say
say it.
i'm getting tired of mind games
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K guys! I really need your opinion on this one. I'm entering it in a contest. What do you think?



Harry James Potter, what is your fate?
Will you live to see victory,
Or die in defeat?

Will you die for another?
As your mother did you,
Or will you perish in vain,
And have Voldemort live through?

And if you live through the battle,
Will Ginny be your love?
Or will it be another,
Whom we’ve heard you speak of?

Of the people you know,
Who will be spared?
Will it be some we loathe,
Or some who we cared?

Has everyone died,
Who has died once before?
Or was it a trick,
With answers galore?

Who is R.A.B?
Is it Sirius’s brother?
Are we correct,
Or is it another?

Who’s side is Snape on?
Is he a traitor?
Or was this all planned,
By someone much greater?

What does it mean,
That your eyes are the same,
As your mother’s were before
She was murdered by He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?

Where are the horcruxes,
That you so earnestly seek?
Will you be able to destroy them,
Or does the outlook look bleak?

Will Ron and Hermione,
Finally get together?
Will they live together in happiness,
Or argue forever?

Will Bill Weasley be cursed,
From an untransformed bite?
Or will he be free from
A werewolf’s awful plight?

Petunia has a secret.
What can it be?
Is it something quite awful,
Or something filled with glee?

What is the meaning,
Behind the word “hallow”?
Is it a word we use now,
Or one that will follow?

If the last word is “scar”
What does this mean?
Do we know all about it,
Or will someone come clean?

Is the locket from Grimmauld
A horcrux indeed?
Does it lead to R.A.B.
Or did we misread?

What are you wearing
About your neck on the cover?
Is it the enigmatic locket,
Or something to be discovered?

One thing’s for sure,
Tear-stains will appear on my pages
I’ll be overwhelmed with the answers
I’ve been awaiting for ages.
Book 7: HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS!!!!!!!

Coming July 21, 2007!!!!!!!

784 pages
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That's really good HP, it really expresses what is on everyone's mind.
are you entering it in a contest on the hogwarts site or something?
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Post by 7Harry7Potter7 »

Thanks Les! I worked pretty hard on it. Actually...that's a lie. It took me probably about an hour to write it. My best poetry I find comes very quickly to me.
Anyway.
I'm entering it on Abe's Books. You win a freaking awesome Harry Potter bookshelf.
Yes, a bookshelf. But I think it would be mostly about the honor of winning!
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7Harry7Potter7 wrote:Thanks Les! I worked pretty hard on it. Actually...that's a lie. It took me probably about an hour to write it. My best poetry I find comes very quickly to me.
Anyway.
I'm entering it on Abe's Books. You win a freaking awesome Harry Potter bookshelf.
Yes, a bookshelf. But I think it would be mostly about the honor of winning!
lol I'm actually the same way, just short burst inspired by muses and visions :P

most my poetry is the same way. I tried ''taking it slow'' and coming up with the perfect line, but it's too hard to get back into that feeling of when I wrote it the first time...

Best wishes and I hope you win, but if you do... you have to post a pic of it :wink:
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This was my epitaph... but... yea... poetry...



Such an avid dreamer, a believer…
one who always tried to never give up hope…
even in the darkest of nights…
light was to be seen in his eyes…

dreams into visions, misty apparitions…
a faint laugh, and a soft goodbye…
f**k… that’s all that can be said…
that’s all that’s in my head…
f**k!... shouting it loud..
As I’m cursing at the clouds…
Heaven’s teardrops…
Warmth pours down my face…
and hair pokes my eyes…
knees give out…
no more words come out of my mouth…
nothing more needs to be said…
the heart dies first, and then the head…
Darkness consumes all the living light…
Not so easily, down without a fight…
Strength gives out…
One last shout?...
Not yet… can’t be without…
Cold concrete… wet asphalt…
I knew they were right man, it was all my damn fault…
Heavier the eyes get…
My clothes... hmph, they getting all wet…
This is my epitaph… my very own death…
Can’t give up hope… till the very last breath…
Sight gives out…
You can do it, man… just… one… more… shout…

A voice can be heard…
‘’Be… at… peace… and be reborn as..’’
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:shock: digg it
If something I've said can be interpreted in two ways.....and one of them offends you .....I meant the other one.
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I had a father who talked with me
Allowed me the right to disagree
to question and always answer me
as well as he could and truthfully
He talked of adventures
Horrors of war;
Of life, it's meaning
What love was for
How each would always need to strive
To improve the world
To keep it alive
Streeded the duty we owe one another
To be aware, each man is a brother
Words of laughter he also spoke
A silly song or a happy joke
Time runs along, some say I'm wise
that I look at life with seeing eyes
My heart is happy
My mind is free
I had a father who talked with me
If something I've said can be interpreted in two ways.....and one of them offends you .....I meant the other one.
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Recipe

Preheat the searching anticipation
While stirring and folding, but don't overmix.
Coat and bread exposed muscle and cartilage,
Season with pheromonal signatures,
Sheathe the parts to be tenderized in nylon.
Invite me to sup with a song like wine,
Offer an apéritif of clasped hands and locked lips.

And we banish the garnish to our plate's holding pen,
We blanch hungry skin with greedy paws,
Shake excess moisture into a voracious funnel.
We marinate and baste in succulent juices,
Our contentment the secret ingredient we hold sacrosanct,
We beat tough meat to abiding submission
By order of our doubled wills.

O! the hiss and sizzle of searing joy,
The braising of rising wonder and madness,
The crazy deep-fried rapture, the dollops of sweetness,
A pinch of lust, dash of abandon, cupping splendid form,
Teasing glimpses through colander dreams
Of early earthy earthly light and brilliance,
The issue, the klaxon from pressure cooker throats!

Boil my need to a caramelized satisfaction,
And cook my drive, my heart and soul, al dente.
Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?!
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BrokenAngel wrote:I had a father who talked with me
Allowed me the right to disagree
to question and always answer me
as well as he could and truthfully
He talked of adventures
Horrors of war;
Of life, it's meaning
What love was for
How each would always need to strive
To improve the world
To keep it alive
Streeded the duty we owe one another
To be aware, each man is a brother
Words of laughter he also spoke
A silly song or a happy joke
Time runs along, some say I'm wise
that I look at life with seeing eyes
My heart is happy
My mind is free
I had a father who talked with me
Love it... but seriously your avvie.... is friggin distracting lol
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AutoPilate wrote:Recipe

Preheat the searching anticipation
While stirring and folding, but don't overmix.
Coat and bread exposed muscle and cartilage,
Season with pheromonal signatures,
Sheathe the parts to be tenderized in nylon.
Invite me to sup with a song like wine,
Offer an apéritif of clasped hands and locked lips.

And we banish the garnish to our plate's holding pen,
We blanch hungry skin with greedy paws,
Shake excess moisture into a voracious funnel.
We marinate and baste in succulent juices,
Our contentment the secret ingredient we hold sacrosanct,
We beat tough meat to abiding submission
By order of our doubled wills.

O! the hiss and sizzle of searing joy,
The braising of rising wonder and madness,
The crazy deep-fried rapture, the dollops of sweetness,
A pinch of lust, dash of abandon, cupping splendid form,
Teasing glimpses through colander dreams
Of early earthy earthly light and brilliance,
The issue, the klaxon from pressure cooker throats!

Boil my need to a caramelized satisfaction,
And cook my drive, my heart and soul, al dente.
never knew it was possible, but that made me horny and hungry at the same time :shock:

awsome father... just awsome.
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I need you why can't you see that?
I want you to be there for me like I am for you,
why can't you do it, you never do,
I sit alone and wallow in my fears, while you sleep easy.

One day you'll understand my side, one day you'll be able to see thru my eyes.
But until then I love you and I take everything you are... faults and all...
my life was easy, watching out for myself...
and then I meet you and wanted to watch out for someone else.
do you got my back like I got yours?
I need you to show it, To make me feel and know it.
not just assume it, that's not how we do it.

I need you to hold me,
I want you to feel me.
Why can't you do it, you never do...
I sit alone and wallow in my fears while you sleep easy.

I'm gunna be there, thru rain or shine.
Can't you do the same for me?
I'm gunna be there, till the end of time.
Will you be there when I need you?

I got your back, I'll hold your hand. Lead you throughout the heavens and land.
When I reach out after I stumble, I'm expected to pick myself up out of the rubble.
Wipe off the dirt, no matter how deep the blood soaked thru,
There's only one person I need to trust and that's supposed to be you.
I don't ask for help from no one else, I can do it myself,
but on those rare occasions that I need someone, I stumble into the rubble again.

I need you to be there for me,
I want you to be there when I need you.
Why can't you do it, you never do...
I sit alone and wallow in my fears while you sleep easy.

I'm gunna be there, thru rain or shine.
Can't you do the same for me?
I'm gunna be there, till the end of time.
Will you be there when I need you?

I've always been told I take too much shit upon myself,
I've always been told I should do what's right for me for once,
I offer my all and expect the same in return,
You my partner, I need you by my side... not behind me following.
When you gunna help me lead instead of following.
I don't need a servant, I want a queen to stand by her king.
Why can't you do that...

I'm gunna be there, thru rain or shine.
Can't you do the same for me?
I'm gunna be there, till the end of time.
Will you be there when I need you?

-Seraph Haku

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LesterG wrote:never knew it was possible, but that made me horny and hungry at the same time :shock:
:shock: *runs away* :lol:
This world will never be what I expected.
And if I don't belong, who would have guessed it?
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Harena

These hills roil
As much as thunder clouds
Just
More
Slowly

Spelunking to the seat of dreams
Dreaming
O! what dreams these?
Message from the Messenger:
Grains of revelation
From the daughters of He?

Free like the dunes,
To be a tidal bath of sand
Unto the shores of
Polytheism
Decay and waves

Salty froth upon a bud
That remembers, still,
How peaceful water tastes

The scabbard, still, it bastes

Wastes no time to make a spurting well
Of imagined enemies.
Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?!
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