shaydaims wrote:onsweetavenue wrote:I assume Tachyon is going to step in.
Thank you! That is exactly what I came here to say (or plea for!). Where's Tachy?!?!!?!? We need a fix!
And that is exactly why she
shouldn't come and help...
Merriam-Webster wrote:A person or thing (as in fiction or drama) that appears or is introduced suddenly and unexpectedly and provides a contrived solution to an apparently insoluble difficulty.
You know what that's the entry for?
Deus ex machina.
They get into the _biggest_ mess, are all f*cked up, and then Tachyon, who we haven't seen in ages, just comes out of nowhere and magically saves the day? You gotta admit that'd be just lame.
What should happen is that the boys are back at their respective homes, Daniel is entirely convinced Bree's fine and makes happy videos, and we don't hear from Jonas at all. Then, after a week, Jonas makes a distressed video, telling Daniel he's got to talk to him and he's on his way. Next video is by Daniel, telling that Jonas arrived and told him about the threats made by the Order, and that he (Daniel) now sees how he was just brainwashed (again) and that they have to help Bree asap. They go to Lucy's apartment, beat the crap out of her, and thereby learn the location of the ceremony. Next vid, beginning: People around a fire, the usual crap. Voiceover "Bree!!" slow motion, slow music with slow, female, voice. Ending: Blair Witch Project style feet running through the woods. A few days later, Bree posting that she is fine and telling how the boys saved her.
Everything is back to the same state as before, Bree is a little more pissed off, Daniel is a little more vulnerable, and Jonas has to deal with the fact that he valued Bree's live over his own.
So, Creators. Just flesh out the dialogue and do it already.
