March Video Commentary Archive
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- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
Heya gypsy! how are you?
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
- colbertnationgirl
- Hymn of One
- Posts: 14857
- Joined: Sat Oct 21, 2006 10:42 am
- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
thanks! ^^
Bleh you beat me to the punch!
Bleh you beat me to the punch!
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
I should note, I am not an admin on this forum...a different one and given my absence both there and here as of late...I don't know why xD!
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
yes, I have written another skit:jc_gypsy7 wrote:ooh, fore I forget, are you still writing, Kenny? I haven't seen you in like forever!
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2319283/12/
The idea behind this one is taking the concept of two people in a conversation both having different motives to the extreme...it doesn't come through well in writing...I think...tell me what you think actually.
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
- colbertnationgirl
- Hymn of One
- Posts: 14857
- Joined: Sat Oct 21, 2006 10:42 am
- colbertnationgirl
- Hymn of One
- Posts: 14857
- Joined: Sat Oct 21, 2006 10:42 am
- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
lol thanks...I know it will work when it is acted out...I just don't know how it works on paper...colbertnationgirl wrote:I thought it worked. It made me laugh!
I am getting to that stage of writing where it is no longer about trying to just write what comes to me...I am trying to take on challenging concepts..the most notable of those being Till Death Do Us Part and Commitment (Which I still need to re-write xD)...the others were just whims...especially Fish...xD and What's Your Sign...those two were just random.
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
- lonelyelendi
- The Order of Denderah
- Posts: 4897
- Joined: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:04 pm
- Location: Bellevue, WA
Bye you girls!
My plays: Random Incoherence
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth
'vote 'mute in '08!
Diane's adopted son
<marlasinger> i'll rape you!
<marlasinger> i mean
<marlasinger> damnit marla be smooth